[Buildroot] [RFC] Slides "Using Buildroot for real projects"
Will Wagner
will_wagner at carallon.com
Fri Oct 21 14:33:30 UTC 2011
On 21/10/2011 14:43, Thomas Petazzoni wrote:
> Le Mon, 17 Oct 2011 18:47:18 +0200,
> Thomas Petazzoni<thomas.petazzoni at free-electrons.com> a écrit :
>
>> The current (unfinished) status of my slides is visible at:
>> http://free-electrons.com/~thomas/pub/using-buildroot-real-project.pdf
<snip>
> Now, if you're still willing to spend some time on this, I'd like to
> have comments on:
> * remaining english typos, wording improvements, etc.
Couple of minor points on the English (Still very impressive from a non
native speaker)
p8: "Buildroot starts by the toolchain" should be "starts with the"
p16 "Any other project specific file" should perhaps be "files"
p17: "kernel and bootloaders often" shouldn't it be singular bootloader?
p17: "drawback is that Buildroot does directly" unless I misunderstand
the use case, don't you mean doesn't?
p21: "I don't recommend this, ..." I'm not sure if you are not
recommending changing the skeleton or using a script to modify it
p30: "finds automagically" should be "automagically finds"
p37: "assignements" should be assignments
p37: "allows to tell" should be "allows you to tell"
> * suggestions of additional contents/topics if there is something I
> missed. Like if you use best practices that aren't described in
> those slides.
One thing I'd love to get written up somewhere is best practice for NFS
mounting a filesystem image, but I realise this may not be relevant to
your talk.
Otherwise your slides are very good at explaining how it all works.
Will
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